Saturday, September 29, 2007

Problem Solution Essay




Along with the rapid evolving world, people‘s idea about talent is also changing. Nowadays, more and more attention is focused on people’s EQ, rather than people’s IQ. To keep up with modern and advanced idea, Engineering Faculty of NUS, which is ranked among the top ten institutions for IT& Engineering, needs to enhance the awareness of the importance of emotional intelligence. As to the specific measures, the following methods are very useful and practical. Firstly, reinforce the dissemination of the importance intelligence. In all likelihood, the reason to the lack of awareness of emotional intelligence is people’s lack of related knowledge. Therefore, the supplement of people’s knowledge about emotional intelligence is significant. Engineering faculty is recommended to involve students in activities such as workshop and talks which are focused on informing students of the importance of emotional intelligence and how to enhance such intelligence. Secondly, the evaluation of students should be based on their emotional intelligence, other than IQ and CAP. If it is established, students will notice the importance of emotional intelligence definitely and pay more attention to it because they know their performance on emotional intelligence will be taken into account their final results of a semester. These are the two methods which can assist Engineering Faculty of NUS to enhance the awareness of the importance of emotional intelligence.

4 comments:

Brad Blackstone said...

This paragrpah is clearly developed and logical. You move clearly from general to specific. The ideas are also fairly clear. I can appreciate your recommendations.

Thanks, Vincent!

Zephyr said...

This is a well-developed paragraph. Particular, a good and relative introduction is given and that it flows smoothly to your main idea.

Exar Kun said...

Ur essay always offers a systematic and rationalized way,which is very logical. Howver, in this essay ,if u can elaborate ur ideas,the essay will be better

vincent said...

I agree with exar kun. I think a common problem in my essays is that i do not elaborate my idea enough. I think i should work hard to improve in this aspect.